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Immortal  by Ruse 4 Review(s)
Frodo3791Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/16/2004
Well, Legolas certainitly got it. Poor elf. You know, for Legolas being such a great warrior and all, why is it that writers put him in so much pain and harm?

This sounds like an interesting story, one I'm hoping you continue soon. Your writing style is really good.

One question. Why was Legolas searching for Celebrian? How did he get involved in this? If he was sent out scouting or something, wouldn't he have had others with him?

-Frodo

KarriReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/16/2004
Ouch! A painful, but splendidly written chapter. Well done! :-)

eokatReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/16/2004
Hi, I am back from holiday to a few super chapters to catch up on. This is such a good story, I liked how the brothers tried to shield Arwen from what their task was, but I think she knows things are amiss. Poor Legolas is trying his best, looking forward to the next chapter. Eokat.

EruannaReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/16/2004
Yay! *runs and puts Elf lord in bedroom*

I don't have any time; I gotta run to the chiropractor, but I wanted to let your know that I'm still here, and I'm still lovin' it!

I am very anxious to know what happens to my dear Elves!!!! *sob* Haven't they endured enough? *evil grin* That's okay, they can take it. We authors seem to like nothing more than to torture characters.

Gotta run; keep it up!

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