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| Do not go gentle into that good night by frodo16424 | 4 Review(s) |
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| Lianna | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/6/2004 |
| Great start to your story, but you should check the end of the first chapter. It looks as though your final sentence has been chopped off in the middle. | |
| Patty | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/16/2004 |
| Oh my, surely you're not stopping there! I love Faramir and must know quickly how badly he's hurt!! The dialogue about a little dagger hurting so much is extremely effective = I feel his pain. | |
| Annis | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/14/2004 |
| a promising first chapter! I love the title,and can't wait to read more! | |
| JULES6 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/14/2004 |
| Wow, I am enjoying this story already. I liked Faramir and love stories about him. Some really good writing here and a nice plot line to start the ball rolling. I could easily believe that he and Aragorn were friends and became friends. Hope to read more of this story. JULES | |