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| Immortal by Ruse | 2 Review(s) |
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| Eruanna | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/14/2004 |
| Ohhh......tense! I don't exactly know what to say, but this is great! The first line (translated of course, 'cause I can't read Elvish) "Legolas! Legolas, don't look!" sent chills up and down my spine. There is something very sad there. :_( Poor, poor Legolas. Always suffering. That was a handy trick, "miscalculating" the dagger thrust. That whole scene had me on the edge of my seat. :) :D *sniff* But where's Celebrian?!?!?!? *sob* On a happier note, you had me rolling on the floor laughing with Legolas' improvisation. :D :D :D 'Lady of the valley, be you heard or seen? I need to know your fate…ah…our guard appears quite…mean?' :D :D :D That was great! Keep it the good work! | |
| Karri | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/9/2004 |
| ouch! My poor elfling! An excellent chapter, R! I worry about the absence of Celebrian, though. But good for Legolas! That's my elfing! ;-) | |