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Grey Shores and Other Poems  by Meldewen Ilce 1 Review(s)
LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/13/2004
Very nice, contrasting the three births. Nice progression.

How about something like:

Merry surprised them--
Esmeralda was "barren"!
Brandybucks rejoiced.

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