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Promises to Keep  by Nessime 4 Review(s)
SimplegirlfromLPReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2019
Clever, I enjoyed that. I wasn’t sure it was the horse until Eomer calls the horses over. Enjoyed this very much.

lwarrenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/6/2004
What a neat story! Had an idea it was one of the two horses thinking about a third of the way through. As I read, I kept hoping it was from Arod's POV, but Hasufel's is just as good! You do well in first person, and your blending with book canon is seamless. I really enjoyed this very much...would like to hear Arod's POV on the elf, tho'!!! ;)

linda

rhiannonReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/4/2004
What a great story! I had no idea it was written from Hasufel's perspective
until I got to the end. Then I had to go back to the beginning to read it
again. As a horse lover, really enjoyed this story.

LindorienReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/4/2004
wow! I didn't expect it to be the horse's view! smart horse.

I liked this Nessime; nice use of first person, nice pacing, holds the interest. I presumed it to be a soldier of the eored until Eomer called the horses forward. Thanks for writing! Lindorien

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