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| Hope by Lily Frost | 2 Review(s) |
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| Kathira | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/9/2004 |
| This is excellent, with nice characterizations and lovely canon details. So good in fact, that I hate to see it marred by even a minor spelling problem - it's "bury" not "burry." I hope you will continue with this story, and even more that you will continue developing your already considerable writing skills, and especially that you will try your hand at a longer story. Author Reply: Thank you so much for the lovely review! I've corrected that, and the use of 'of' instead of 'off' in the summary. I have a long story that needs some editing before posting here, it's on fanfiction.net right now. | |
| webster | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/9/2004 |
| Lovely--you convey emotion without wavering into melodrama | |