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The Fourth Son  by The Ent 1 Review(s)
Kitt of LindonReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/9/2004
Elrond's thought seems very true, about how Elves and Dwarves accept female warriors easier than Men. I was just pondering the subject the other day, so that was enlightening.
If you still need a beta reader, I'd be interested. I have a fair idea how that works, (I've never beta read before). I'm probably best at catching grammer mistakes, and I can also ensure everything holds to canon. Let me know what you think.

Author Reply: I like to think I'm open minded, but the fact is that there are some things I'm not open minded about. Pity! I guess there is always hope for myself and everyone else to learn and grow. I have always envisioned Tolkiens Elves as more base in instinct and more advanced culturally. Thank you for the review!
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