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| Fighting the Long Defeat by Elvenesse | 1 Review(s) |
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| lois | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/22/2004 |
| I liked the lines "My daughter is lost to Lúthien’s plight, her love stands strong against Mordor’s black wall" from the first version better, because of the apparent dual meaning/reference to Aragorn. FWIW. bests, L. Author Reply: Thank you, I'm going to have to decide on a final version eventually. I like the dual meaning as well, but someone else thought it was a weak line as they didn't pick up on it. | |