| The Rise Of The House Of Telcontar  by French Pony | 2 Review(s) | 
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| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter:  2 on 2/10/2004 | 
| I wonder how much of an Elf Arwen was at this point.  She would have been more than three-quarters Elf, right? But was she changed when she bound herself to Aragorn?  And what would be the effect of a fully human father (Elros's blood must have been pretty diluted by then) on the child she was carrying?  And how would that affect the pregnancy? 
 All that aside, I like these female characters you are creating.
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| eokat | Reviewed Chapter:  2 on 2/4/2004 | 
| Poor Arwen, she has got it bad. Firstborn and secondborn pregnancy symptoms rolled into one. It's bad enough just having the 'normal' symptoms{talking from personal experience]. Hope she feels better next chapter, although I have a feeling that this problem is only the beginning. | 
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