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| Deeper Than Skin by Bill-the-Pony | 2 Review(s) |
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| Jen Littlebottom | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2004 |
| Ooo.. fascinating! I love little Legolas getting into trouble - and his older brother, trying so hard not to lose his temper. I spotted just one typo: “Not to me, but to your niece, you’re father, and Celebithil his advisor.” <-- you're should be your. But other than that, a most curious beginning, and I'm wondering who this Mithion is... | |
| Nikara | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/6/2004 |
| I'm sure this will prove to be very interesting. It is well done, and I love the descriptions of your characters. Keep it up! | |