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| All Is Fair in Love and War by Chigger | 2 Review(s) |
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| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/21/2003 |
| Another good beginning! I am very curious about the rider. You seem to have started this one with a cliff-hanger. Author Reply: Yes, cliff-hangers are wonderful beginning chapters. That way your readership is hooked more easily than if I began it with a long chapter like the next one. :) | |
| EomerofEastfold | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/20/2003 |
| Wow, that was certainly an interesting piece. I think it shows the drive and determination of a soldier very well. But, is it the end? Author Reply: Is it the end? You don't know do you. ;) | |