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| For a Better World by Ellynn | 2 Review(s) |
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| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/10/2026 |
| (I have got to get back to reading... I carved out a bit of writing and revising time today but found myself out of energy by the time I'd finished. So I'm going to take myself off and listen to an audiobook going forward. But I hope to return to this story as soon as tomorrow [Sunday, I mean, if you happen to read this note later]. I'm thinking positive thoughts about the prospect, anyhow. From the number of chapters you've posted since the last time I looked at it, you're making good progress! I can hardly wait to see how the story unfolds...) Author Reply: Yay for writing and revising! 😊 Congratulations 😊 And thanks so much for the interest for this story 😘 | |
| Lady Forlong | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/10/2026 |
| "Thank you." What a concept! They probably don't have a word for that in Orkish. And not only that, he's starting to figure out that he's been lied to. Author Reply: Of course they don't have it 😉 That's why the word is written in italic - it's one of the cases when italic is used to show that a certain word doesn't exist in Black speech (as I said in the notes in the first chapter). Anyway, I hope that the italics are properly displayed - both on computers or cell-phones, or wherever someone is reading. He'll discover more lies and more new words and many more interesting things in the future... 😊 Thank you 😘 | |