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Eä's Redemption  by AaronSecret 1 Review(s)
LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 15 on 8/23/2026
I am being harangued by a cat who insists on sending me off to my bed right now!, so I hope this will make sense! (It will have to be brief; the cat has the voice of a banshee and knows how to use it.)

You have done a remarkable job of capturing the essence of the Silmarils in this challenging format. Very evocative!

alas, every overdone passion turns to corruption
Alas, the joy conveyed throughout the chapter is suddenly swept away by Shadow in the last stanza. So much tragedy and grief resulted from that zeal, that passion.

Author Reply: Hehehe, feed a snack to the cat from me :)
thanks! the format is sometimes indeed challenging to capture all the descriptions and adjective I want, especially since there is also a metaphysical touch to my explanations. And yes....tragic losses, indeed...I wish Feanor's story was longer, I really like him as a character <3

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