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| All Work and No Play by Lindelea | 1 Review(s) |
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| Fimbrethil | Reviewed Chapter: 29 on 6/15/2026 |
| Calendil! I had forgotten about him but I can vaguely remember…This is also bad. Spiders?! It is kind of funny, and endearing, that the Hobbits shorten the Rangers’ names. “Frankly, that would be a happier outcome than any I've been imagining for the past hour,' Farry reflected after a moment's thought.” Wow he does not sound like himself, and rather more like Pippin in Denethor’s MT. “Young Faramir Took had often been called "too old for his years"” — I was about to say he seemed to be making a decision his namesake would, and then that sentence cinched it. You have successfully read your readers’ minds, Lindelea. What happens next? Author Reply: Thank you for sharing your thought process! I'm glad the chapter works. I'm hoping to post the next chapter very soon. | |