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| Family Matters by Lindelea | 1 Review(s) |
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| PSW | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/25/2025 |
| He’s having no luck with the weather lately!! So - was I right in catching some St Elmo’s fire before The Incident, or was that all just lightening buildup? He did the best he could - I think I probably would have tried the forest too rather than staying out in the open. Didn’t seem to work out for him though. I hope someone finds him soon! Author Reply: You were right about the St Elmo's fire! Tolly's experience is based on a lot of anecdotal evidence, news reports, and articles about lightning. In some articles I read, I found descriptions of St Elmo's fire associated with lightning strikes. One source said, "While not inherently dangerous, St. Elmo's fire can be a warning that lightning might strike soon, so it's best to seek shelter if you see it." After correcting the "head of escort" errors earlier, I read through this chapter again and realised that it reflected an earlier version that got revised when the geography started getting complicated. So just know that Tolly's road went north along the eastern side of Bindbole Wood, not west through the Wood and then north up the western side of the Wood. (In case you pay attention to such things. I tend to do that because I form a mental movie when I read, including a mental map of characters' movements so I can keep track of what's going on and who's doing what and all that.) I hope Tolly's trajectory from this point onwards is plausible... (It was certainly fascinating to contemplate! But I don't know if I should LOL at myself or not...) Thanks so much for reading and taking time to share your thoughts! | |