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| Shadow by fael bain | 1 Review(s) |
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| sofia | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 11/14/2003 |
| i really love the story... cant wait to read more. But if i may, i would suggest making it easier to tell who is talking. I kind of gets a big confusing on who is saying what. --sofia Author Reply: Thanks Sofia for the feedback, I will try to make it clearer, glad you like it! xx | |