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| The Harpist's Redemption by Coreinha | 3 Review(s) |
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| Fimbrethil | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 6/22/2025 |
| Ohhh I see. About X. Good thing she basically failed. ….After reading all this chaper: this time she didn’t. About losing his wife and children…his father AND his grandfather did, for a time, so he should know something about it. “The foursome spent the day wandering around the city. The Elves found themselves entirely overwhelmed by the sheer size of the city. Elrohir summed it up nicely when he exclaimed 'it's as big as the entire land of Rohan!' when they arrived in Manhattan that morning.” Funny. Ah! I think it might be smaller? Maybe the island is the size of Rohan? Oh, I looked it up, Rohan is about 53,000 sq. mi. and NYC is only a bit more than 300 sq. mi. So Rohan is slightly larger than England, or similar in size to Honduras or Cuba. Oh dear, Legolas! “He was facedown in the water and not moving. Elrohir dropped the katana and dove in after his friend. He reached Legolas quickly, his strong arms propelling him through the water reminded him of all the times Elrond had told the twins they were more like fish than elflings. As he wrapped his arms around his unconscious friend, he wondered why on earth these bizarre things popped into his head at such critical moments” heh Oh Valar, no! Elladan!" Elrohir forgot about Legolas entirely as he ran to his brother's inert form. Time seemed to slow, as he ran those few yards. His heart was pounding in his ears like a drum, drowning out all other sounds. Oh dear! Who will survive??? Oh No! And Melkor killed Ëarendil and took the Silmaril! At least Elrohir knows the star is gone… | |
| Deana | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 10/26/2003 |
| This story is very good! I usually skip over the Valinor stories, but something made me read this one, and I'm glad I did! Great job, please post more! Author Reply: I'm glad you liked it! I just posted, I hope you enjoy this chapter as well ^_^ XOXO Cor | |
| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 10/14/2003 |
| Thank goodness Elrond removed that device from Glorfindel. I was beginning to think you had forgotten him. Your story is very suspenseful, Coreinha. The Japanese assasin surprised me greatly. I wasn't expecting her. Looking forward to the next confrontation between assasin and elves! LKK Author Reply: I would NEVER forget any of my characters, not even Cell-hu, who I've recently been accused of forgetting ^_^ He's around, just not a big part of the plot right now, you'll see more of him soon, I promise. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, to me, Xiaoli seemed an obvious turn, to pit the elves against a type of fighting they've never experienced before, well it just sounded interesting to me ^_^ As for the next confrontation,you won't have to wait too long, in ch 11 or 12, most likely XOXO Cor | |