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Moments of Passing  by Elfique 4 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/27/2010
I often wonder why it was Glorfindel and not Ecthelion who was sent back to Middle Earth. Both died protecting their people and fighting against twisted Maiar. But I love this glimpse of Glorfindel's death. Thank you!

Author Reply: Sorry its taken a while to get back to you, thanks for the review though!
Ecthelion is rumbling away in Valinor plot bunny-esque at the moment, dangerous times.

ellieReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/26/2010
These are both very powerful! The last line of the Glorfy one is perfect and does indeed say it all.

Author Reply: Thanks very much! I spent ages trying to get the last line right so its nice to know I apparently did!

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/26/2010
Ah, Glorfindel. You do a good job of capturing his final moment and the last sentence says it all. Excellent!

Author Reply: Thanks for yet another review, I'm glad you thought he came across well - its hard to sum up such a prolific character!

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/26/2010
Beautiful ending - I mean, the last sentence. It must have been a relief for him to see them safe.

Author Reply: Thanks very much (again) for the review! I wanted to tie things up nicely and solidify what their sacrifices were for, it seemed very Glorfindel too!

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