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| Truth Be Told by Virtuella | 2 Review(s) | 
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 4/27/2010 | 
| Oh wow! *Two* chapters! How did I miss one? I loved this one-- Fana is so good for him; I love that she really *listens* to him, and that she was able to say "poor thing" about the story of the orc, rather than turning away in fear or disgust. And of course, Gleowine continues to be a very clever mentor. His challenge to Deoric to write a new version of the tale, more conducive to the new realities of post-War life is a good one. I find myself curious about how Deoric will respond! On to the next chapter now... Author Reply: Thank you. I hope Fana's personality is coming out a bit clearer in this story than in "Measure," where she was very much "generic love interest." It was one of my projects for this fic to give her more space.  | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 4/20/2010 | 
| Yes, it's time to recast the stories so they no longer form propaganda, but betin to approach the truth of them--that both sides had reason to want the land and feel it theirs, and both were equally wrong in the end--as much wront as right. And she has realized that there is a humanity of sorts even in the orcs. Good for them all! Author Reply: Thank you! Nothing like a bit of revisionism... ;-)  | |