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| Promise and Sorrow by Virtuella | 4 Review(s) |
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| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/2/2008 |
| The line 'these garments spread out before me' speak so beautifully, forlornly, pitifully.... of dreams lost. I loved the ending for I was fooled and assumed it was the soldier who died. Beautifully written. | |
| Tink | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/20/2008 |
| This choked me up, but in a good way, if that's possible. During wars, so many are sacrificed. This was a good reminder of that, that the families of soldiers and civilians suffer too. Even when the wars are "won". | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/19/2008 |
| Very nice reversal at the end. Touching details. Author Reply: Thanks for all your comments, it's nice to have such attentive readers! | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/19/2008 |
| This is another lovely tale, thenarration so stark and simple. I love the twist at the end - I thought it was the girl's POV, but it reminds us that civilians died as well. Jay Author Reply: Thanks for your comments - I'm glad the twist is working out the way I meant it to. | |