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| Don't Explain by Gwidhiel | 2 Review(s) |
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| Nilmandra | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/14/2008 |
| I like your reasoning here of Miriel's reasoning - it makes sense and provides understanding that fits what we see later in the deeds and words of Finwe, Feanaro and others. Author Reply: Thanks, Nilmandra! This was my main purpose when I set out to write this story. I don't know why it had to take me 13 chapters to get here ... but I'm very pleased to know that it makes sense and foreshadows what Finwë and Fëanáro went on to do after Míriel's passing. | |
| Redheredh | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/6/2008 |
| I just wanted to let you know I have finally finished reading what has led up to this conversation between Indis and Miriel and am not disappointed at all with the explanation of Miriel's withdrawal from life. I like that you made her a quiet woman, who is not afflicted by maddness or fey. There is plenty drama enough with Finwe's manic behaviour without that. ;) Peace of mind is the appealing thread you have woven in throughout this well told story. Author Reply: Hi, Redheredh, Thanks very much for your review! I'm very glad to hear that my explanation of Míriel's choice made sense. | |