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| Don't Explain by Gwidhiel | 2 Review(s) |
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| Ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/5/2008 |
| YAY!! I'm so glad to see this story posted here. I've been enjoying it immensely at Sil Writers. It is always good to find any story about Indis and it's a real treat to find one so well written. Just a suggestion, please put the chapter numbers at the beginning of each chapter so that folks like me who print now to read later don't get so confused if we drop said stack of printed story chapters anf have to put them all back in order again :-) Looking forward to reading more chapters! Author Reply: Thanks for suggesting SoA to me, Ellie! I didn't realize that the chapter numbers don't appear with the title. I've inserted them as part of the title text, so that should take care of it. Thanks so much for reading, and sharing your feedback with me! | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/4/2008 |
| My first reaction to this is sympathy for the huge, tangled, complicated family Galadriel and her family are returning too. If I were Celeborn, I might have stayed away too! Author Reply: Yes, I hadn't thought of that ... Celeborn probably had lots of reasons to be reluctant to follow his wife to Aman! | |