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| Tide of Destiny - Part One: Choices by Lady Bluejay | 4 Review(s) |
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| Eluthaun | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/17/2008 |
| Resisting the urge to leave a "review" for each chapter, I have resolved to allow myself this indulgence every several. I am enjoying myself no end in reading Tide of Destiny. When Lothiriel chanced to meet the Istar (that is what I am assuming) I leapt in my chair with delight and excitement; and felt by contrast a gut-wrenching despair on behalf of Bergit.In particular I love that the choice of words is never florid, and yet I still see and feel the settings and characters in great clarity. I particularly find my emotions being given a real run-around! I'm terribly pleased to have chanced upon "Stories of Arda" as a website, and your work. -Eluthaun. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/4/2008 |
| Well - I'm glad Lothiriel found a 'friend'. Who knows she's going to marry a blond from the North. (Although it'll take more than that knowledge to keep Mr Slime away from her. And Bergit needs a friend - so it's a good thing Eomer's there. He might not be able to foresee a need to be there so far ahead he needs to check what year it is, but he'll certainly be able to help to some extent. Author Reply: Mr Slime causes a great load of trouble - but he gets his just desserts in the end. Eomer has had a soft spot for Bergit since the beginning - that does not change.LBJ | |
| Alquawende | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/16/2007 |
| >>>Éomer quickly unsaddled Fireball and installed him in the other stable; he’d come and groom him properly when he had found out what was going on. Do you mean Firefoot instead of Fireball? I love this so far. Now I have to wonder who that Seron person is... Is he a character introduced by Tolkien or an OC? How old is Lothiriel supposed to be in this and Eomer? Thanks for writing! Author Reply: Hi Alquawende, I wondered if someone would ask me that. Fireball is the horse Eomer had before Firefoot. He inherited from his father. Dont forget the Ring-wars took place when Eomer was 28 - seven years hence from this scene.Eomer will meet Firefoot soon. You must have missed the ages Eomer is 21- Lothy is 13. I was hoping you might guess who Seron is. The next chapter should clinch it if you haven't. Thanks for reading and reviewing. LBJ | |
| Yanic | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/13/2007 |
| You have such a wonderful villain in Umar. And poor Bergit and Edwick! I really love the characters you have created. Can't wait to read more. Author Reply: Glad you like it.. Villains are alway interesting. Thanks for reviewing. LBJ | |