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| Song of the Sea by White Wolf | 3 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/16/2007 |
| Alas--the Sea Longing when it hits apparently can be very painful. And this secret garden sounds wonderful! Author Reply: I totally agree. Yearning for something that takes over your whole being and that you are forcing yourself to deny, has got be painful. Glad you liked my garden. I wanted it to an oasis for the ones using it. | |
| Mairi | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/15/2007 |
| I haven't seen any annoying out-of-place words in this. Even the dialogue fits, which isn't very common. Anyway, all in all I liked the tone and the plot. Good work! Author Reply: Well, that's good to hear.:o) I'm glad you like the dialogue, which is one of the tings I try hard to do well. I'm also glad you like the story so far. | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/14/2007 |
| Wow, a powerful start to this. Looking forward to more! Author Reply: Thank you. I'm very happy you like the beginning. I will update next week. | |