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| Healing Hope by Ithil-valon | 1 Review(s) |
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| Earosse | Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 4/10/2009 |
| This is a wonderful chapter, however, I have one little quibble. It's the line: "From seemingly out of nowhere a thick black arrow flew straight and true, striking Elladan in the back with a sickening thud of impact." The problem is the fact that the twins were fighting back to back. I wouldn't have been possible for either twin to be hit in the back. Please explain why. | |