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Elven Song by Jocelyn	2 Review(s)
docmon	Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 9/16/2004
wait! no! this was supposed to make him want to stay in middle-earth! now he wants to go more! you do torture us exquisitely, Jocelyn. I was actually surprised by the solution Legolas found on the execution field; I hadn't thought of it myself. And I'm glad that he did finally share the experience with Gandalf and Aragorn. It answered some questions of my own, except one: how did all that result in Legolas's BODY appearing before them, in effect, switching places with Disaran? I'm not sure how that part's supposed to work. And the others haven't really questioned it either, which I find odd, since it's the most shocking part - at least to me. I know spirit and body are bound to an extent, but Legolas's was parted (mostly) from his body. And if it was reunited to it, why not where the physical body was located, instead of where Disaran's was located? well, back to reading. I MUST find out how this ends! monica

Sivan	Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 12/12/2003
I can't believe that you KILLED my elf. Luckily as I read the forward chapters, you returned him to life, and for that I thanked you. Please update soon, I like this story a lot. I love what I read so far. Keep them coming... Sivan