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Locke And Key  by NaughtyNettie 7 Review(s)
pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 16 on 4/25/2006


Poor Legolas, going to get hanged and not a quick death either. This town has a cruel way of dealing with justice.
Glorifindel it seems would have better luck of grabbing Legolas than talking to Leandir, he seems afraid of his position...

Angrod and the twins seem to have a better idea, just hope they don't get themselves in more trouble... But, Glorifindel is there isn't there...

Update soon...

Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing! You have picked up on all of the characters conflicts perfectly and I'm glad that it is coming across clearly :o)

FireReviewed Chapter: 16 on 4/25/2006
Did I mention how much I love you're description of the elves journey through the wood, I could just really see it in my mind :D


Author Reply: Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing it :o)

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 16 on 4/25/2006
Thank goodness! They're there and they're dangerous and they won't let anything terminal happen to the poor head-injured elf. Even if the inhabitants of the town haven't got enough sense to release him and understand just who is lying - or the courage to stand up against the nasty dudes.

And the mere sight of them is stimulating Legolas's memory. That's a good thing, too!

Save that elf!

Author Reply: Save the elf huh? I'm working on it but some other things have to happen first ;o) Thank you for reviewing!!

FireReviewed Chapter: 16 on 4/24/2006
So there they are. Legolas with somethings popping up in his mind that he does recognise, Glorfindel trying to stop it politely, and the other three ready to start a big fight :) And with those crooks around it just might be what will happen. This sounds like quite an explosive situation.
I can't see that hanging Legolas from a tree will ever happen... I think the tree would rather lose one of his braches actually, after all he is a woodelf ;)

Author Reply: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm sure the horse wouldn't want to hurt Legolas either but things really aren't in that type of control right now :o)

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 16 on 4/24/2006
Well, that may not be a cliff hanger, but it's certainly a Legolas hanger! Get on the stick here, Glorfindel.

Author Reply: Glorfindel...ever diplomatic. Things are about to get more out of his control though.

LaureleafReviewed Chapter: 16 on 4/23/2006
Now that's just mean - leaving us hanging (pardon the pun) like that! LOL, I am also falling off my seat to see what happens and hope you do not make us wait too long!

Author Reply: I'm sorry. I didn't realize that I would upset so many people by leaving the chapter there ;o) Thank you so much for reviewing!!!

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 16 on 4/23/2006
That was a very cruel ending to your chapter,now I know why you are called Naughty Nettie!! but it kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time(at the end I fell off)Please update as soon as possible I cant wait!!!!!

Author Reply: LOL! Good, just where I wanted to keep you ;o) Thank you so much for reviewing!!

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