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| Locke And Key by NaughtyNettie | 5 Review(s) |
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| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 4/18/2006 |
| Estel must be feeling bad if he's willing to take medicine. And not being able to do anything towards finding Legolas will be making him feel worse. I do hope Dorlas hasn't sent the rescue party off in the wrong direction - he's obnoxious enough and there really isn't time for Glorfindel et al to explore the woods. They need to retrieve that poor depressed elf before very many more minutes elapse, or they'll be too late. And Legolas doesn't seem in too good a state. I hope the twins' healing skills are up to helping him - he's holding his own, but he's not really getting any better. Not that that matters, of course, if they're about to hang you. Rescue party to the ... well ... rescue! Author Reply: Estel is feeling pretty horrible indeed and Legolas isn't feeling too much better. Thank you so much for reviewing!!! | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 4/18/2006 |
| Ah... Great...I want to know more... Poor Estel, he is tormented by thoughts of Legolas injured, it is good Elrond is thier to comfort him, as much as he can. Good thing his friends are near, but I hope they get thier in time, and will anyone believe them... Legolas is giving up, but he feels hopeless, and not knowing anything that you are would make you want to give up.... Please update soon, can't wait!! Author Reply: Estel is VERY lucky to have Elrond. Legolas really needs him too! Thank you so much for reviewing!! | |
| Fire | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 4/17/2006 |
| I know, I know... you put up the postings every sunday... but it's getting very very hard to wait that long ;) At least now we know that both Legolas and the 4 looking for him will be at the same place at the same time.... that is .... if they didn't get the wrong direction... O man , I love you're story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Author Reply: Sunday isn't too long away is it? ;o) Thank you so much for your kind words and thank you for reviewing!! | |
| Elizabeth_Elindel | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 4/16/2006 |
| Soo... What will happen? You're holding me in suspence. I must know, I must!!! :) Author Reply: But I promise I won't hold you there for long :o) Next chapter is coming right up. Thank you for reviewing!! | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 4/16/2006 |
| One of the things I appreciate about this story is its pacing. You obviously have a plot clearly laid out, with several different groups of people, and you're drawing them together, moving us along so we have time to see what's happening but not enough time to grow bored. Nice job on that, Nettie. It sounds as if both Estel and Legolas are in pain here, physical, mental, and emotional. The rescue party needs to hurry up! Author Reply: Whew! I am so glad that you said that. I have read many stories where I have felt rushed through what is going on but I also didn't want to bore anyone. Thank you! | |