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| Locke And Key by NaughtyNettie | 3 Review(s) |
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| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 3/29/2006 |
so sad when Adaras died, Legolas loved the old man you can see. His son should never have brought those men, and he accused Legolas of killing him... Good thing they were interupted before Legolas got hurt, but he is now alone with no-one... It seems Leandir may help, but a trail with no memory isn't good... I hope his family and friend come soon, he is in need of someone on his side.... Update soon... Author Reply: The friends are on their way but they can't get there too soon. Sorry to disappoint you with Adras' death but I am glad that you liked him. Thank you for reviewing! | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 3/27/2006 |
| Legolas is in better hands with Leandir than he would be with the thugs, but he's still in deep trouble. But it looks like help is on the way. Let's just hope it gets there on time. Author Reply: Leandir is much better than Dorias and Rathir but still not as good as Elrond and Estel. The friends are on their way though. | |
| Lyn | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 3/27/2006 |
| An extremely well written story! Just one comment: why do you hold this elf and Gods why is Adras dead?" I don't know if "Gods" was meant to be a form of swearing or not. It seems out of place and is unnecessary just to ask two questions. If it was meant to indicate great shock, perhaps more description of the scene is needed...his posture, facial expression, tone of voice. In addition, perhaps changing the punctuation could accompany the added descriptive scene: "Why do you hold this elf? And...Gods!! Why is Adras dead?!" It all depends on how emotional the man is when confronted with the realization that Adras is dead. Author Reply: Thanks for the advice. It is appreciated. | |