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| The Making of a Man by TigerLily713 | 1 Review(s) |
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| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/19/2003 |
| "Olihre groaned. He wasn’t sure that he wanted Gaviwyr anywhere near him with even a spoon, let alone a sharp metal weapon,"--that's very funny! Nice description of the competition. I know how hard it is to write such a scene with enough detail to be convincing. And you use it to show personalities too. Good job. | |