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| A Light In Dark Places by Shirebourn | 3 Review(s) |
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| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/1/2005 |
| I love it and I have no idea how I missed it before. I must put you on my story alert so that I can know when you post new chapters. I love the very mature way that Diamond approached Pippin. His answer to where he had been was very good also. (“Not all of it – let it suffice that we went away, naïve of where and how long we’d be gone. We were called away – perhaps it was our duty, as it was the duty of many others as well, to go where we had gone, and to not return, as we were lucky enough to do so.”) He was honest but he did not tell all by any means. It was almost as if he was testing her ability to hear it and his own to tell it. This continues to be a lovely story. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/30/2005 |
| Sorry I'm having to catch up. Actually, the Thain before Paladin was Cousin Ferumbras, but that's okay. And it's interesting to see how you show the defining meeting between Pippin and Diamond. I've tried it also, and it's fun to play with. Poor Pervinca--she was foiled at getting Pippin into trouble. Hopefully she won't be disappointed in like manner again, as hopefully they are both growing out of that phase of relationship. As for the foresight, I, too, have seen some hobbits having ESP moments, so that is one device I truly like seeing and exploring, and you are handling it well. Hope that Pippin comes to trust her enough to tell her about it soon. | |
| Vicki_Turner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/24/2005 |
| I really like this story! Please continue writing; i want to know what happens next! | |