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Lament  by Avalon Estel 2 Review(s)
NerdanelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/22/2005
This is beautiful! And it is so sad as well. I have always felt sorry for Daeron, although I've never really understood him completely. You use an interesting rhyme scheme in this. I really like it.

Author Reply: I'm happy you enjoyed it. I always felt bad for Daeron, because I think what he did was more his way of trying to protect Luthien from death and darkness rather than acts of malice. I believe he did those things out of love. I enjoy experimenting with rhyme and poetry. Thank you very much!

FarawynReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/10/2005
Love it!

Author Reply: I'm happy you do! Thanks!

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