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Lady of The WoodReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 1/19/2005
Lovely! I just read the entire story. You did a nice job of simplifying the words from the book to make them more movie-ish. At least I'm assuming that it was you? I know that they've released the LOTR scripts and I've been wondering if it includes the deleted scenes?

Anyway, I really enjoyed your story. It was a good piecing together of those two short scenes we get in the movie and helped explain what Faramir was doing when he first see's Eowyn.

I hope you write more.
LOTW

Author Reply: Yep, it was me. But when the scene got too hard to "translate" I just tried to remain true. Sometimes, the modernizations made me cringe. In the beginning, I tried to stay PJ/Fran/Philippa faithful, but ended up with the story having a life of its own.

I think i wasn't the only one who was confused with "why is he looking into her room?" haha. But i realy liked the idea that it was the first time he saw her.

Anyway, thank you very much for the review! I appreciate it greatly. :)

- Jenna.

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