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| A Promise Kept by Hobbit Lass21 | 2 Review(s) |
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| Daffy | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/15/2005 |
| Yay, a new Gilly story! Awww, a wittle Pippin! I love hobbit babies! They're so cute! I like that Celandine was there at all their births. But I miss you! I hope we can talk tomorrow! Author Reply: Yes, wittle Pippins make me happy too!! I dunno if we can talk tonight, as I will be away, but I'll certainly get in touch soon! Thanks for reading! | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/14/2005 |
| This is very vivid and descriptive. I love the way you show Merry's fears and worries, and the way time drags on for him. One thing you might want to fix. Eglantine was *not* a Brandybuck, she was a Banks. It was Merry's mother who was a Took, and sister to Pippin's father Paladin that made them cousins. Other than that it is an excellent start. Author Reply: Thank you, I knew that one of their mothers used to be from the others family, I just chose the wrong one. Thanks for the tip. Yeah, I'm guessing that time would drag for someone of that age..(it STILL drags like that for me..) | |