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| Love Me, Please, Forever by FrodoBaggins_88 | 2 Review(s) |
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| Farawyn | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/13/2005 |
| I want more!!! When's it going to go up? It's a great idea for a story. But can you work a little bit of humor??? I like to laugh a little once in a while. I don't mean make it a comedy, but so that you guffaw once in a while. Well, I think you're doing a great job, keep doin' what you're doin'! Farawyn Author Reply: How'd I not get your review? Sure, in the future I'll try to work in a bit of humor, which means having to start in chapter five with that, but I'll work it in. :) Glad to know you read it, and hope you keep reading! I appreciate it. I am posting a new chapter now, so hope you haven't forgotten this story! Thanks for reading! Frodo | |
| Farawyn | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/11/2005 |
| I think that maybe you should put all the chapters up at once, or make them a little longer. No offence, but they are super short! Author Reply: The next one is already nine pages long (and probably will still grow a bit), whereas these two were four each. I'm definitely working on longer chapters. :) Thanks for letting me know what you think of chapter length. ;) It'll be something to keep me writing more. Thank you. | |