| Immortal by Ruse | 2 Review(s) |
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| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/16/2004 |
This was a really tense chapter - well done. I still have a very bad feeling that something is going to go wrong, and at least one of them will be badly hurt.
Jay |
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| Karri | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/16/2004 |
| Holy smokes, R! I hadn't even had time to read the last chapter and here is a new one. Ack! Legolas doesn't sound like he is entirely in suitable shape for fighting, but I imagine the distraction of worrying about him is good for it seems to be keeping the twins for loosing it on the orcs. Two terrific chapters. :-D |
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