When Shadow Touches Home by daw the minstrel

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Karri · 1 August 2003 · Chapter 3: Getting into Trouble at Home

You've painted an excellent portrait of a family in turmoil. I'm looking forward to seeing them work through their grief as a family.

Elemmire · 31 July 2003 · Chapter 2: Getting into Trouble Abroad

>>AN: Warning to Dragon-of-the-North: Unreasoned violence against Orcs in this chapter. My apologies. This made up for all angst in the chapter - lol! Glad to see you writing more so soon, I love your stories! I can see how devastating it was to the whole family. Remind me of Elrond's sons and their own orc hunting, of course...quite the parallel. More soon! :)

Fadesintothewest · 28 July 2003 · Chapter 1: Left Alone

Oh my, what a sad tale this is, but of course it can only be with the tragic death of Lorellin. Another glance into Thranduil's family, how Eilian has come to be who he is, how Ithilden came to be by Thranduil's side, and of course our little Legolas. I was wondering if you would like reviews left at both FF.net or here. It's easy to do both, but again that depends on which site you like them from. I am glad this story has continued, a prequel, a long line of stories in this most interesting take on Mirkwood's finest!

Strange Blaze · 27 July 2003 · Chapter 1: Left Alone

Ah so we get to see the very beginning of everything...nice start to the story. I really like the brothers younger. Poor Legolas! Thranduil is doing a great job so far without Lorellin. I love to see this earlier story develop many of the themes that occur later on. In the chronologically later stories, it seems as if Thranduil has never quite gotten over the death of his wife (as no one really does) but now we get to see how Legolas helped with it. I hope to see Eilian soon as I imagine we will :)

Nilmandra · 27 July 2003 · Chapter 1: Left Alone

There is so much pain in this chapter, and we have not even seen Eilian's yet! Oh, Thranduil is lost and Ithilden feels guilty and little Legolas just doesn't know what to think. I see a sad story coming, but with hope, always with hope.