Reviews (2)

Nilmandra · 31 October 2003 · Chapter 1: Spiders, Wargs, and Wights!

Ah, I must speak to Elladan and Elrohir. They have merely to work on their story, just a little, and they will make themselves out to be the heroes of this tale! The elflings wished for a scary adventure, found themselves lost, and the twins simply aided them in finding their way out of the dark and terrifying tunnels. They got their scary adventure and were shepherded out of the tunnels in a most efficient manner. Try it, my favorite twins, embellish it and enhance it. Ada will buy it :D

Jay of Lasgalen · 31 October 2003 · Chapter 1: Spiders, Wargs, and Wights!

What a fantastic story, I loved it! I was wondering who the 'wights' were, until I realised that Elrond was present. Then it was obvious. Elrond + two tall, mysterious figures = twincident. I was glad, though that Elrohir showed some remorse and was sorry they'd scared Legolas so much. I like protective Thranduil, and I love the revenge - especially that Haldir can howl like a warg. At the end, I rther suspect that Elrond was trying not to laugh! And the ending is wonderful - that the twins end up sharing a room that night. Jay