BittenBuggy · 28 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Brothers
I have never been much of a Finarfin-fan, but I must say you portrayed him in a very sweet and innocent light. Having Fëanor as his counterpart only intensified this, and you showed Fëanor in the way befitting of an elf. I have seen many authors forget and make him a horrible monster, who was born terrible only to become worse later. I applaud you for giving these characters such respect. Lovely, lovely piece.