Sphinx · 12 October 2003 · Chapter 2: Time In Lothlòrien
Nice, except for the fact that you used 'Gwilwileth-nin' at least six times. I liked Celeborn here. Good characterization. Sphinx
Author's reply
LOL - didn't realize I used that endearment so much! I went back and changed a few of the uses of 'Gwilwileth-nin' to something else - thanks for pointing that out! And it's nice to know I got Celeborn somewhat right with my characterzation of him! Thanks again!