I Bequeath by Zimraphel
Sphinx · 28 September 2003 · Chapter 1: I Bequeath
Lovely story. You caught both Gil galad and Cirdan so very well. I especially liked the fact that Cirdan was least moved by the rings, and in comparison to both Galadriel and Elrond, it somehow establishes him as a character much stronger than what others give him credit for. Plus, the angst-demon on the shoulder smiled when you made Erenion call Cirdan 'Ada.' Very nice. ;) Sphinx
Lyllyn · 27 September 2003 · Chapter 1: I Bequeath
I know I've read this before, but I don't think I ever told you how much I liked it. As in your 'Song of the Waters' Cirdan is drawn very well, the sailor mixed with a touch of mysticism and foresight. The vignette is poignant and beautiful.
daw the minstrel · 27 September 2003 · Chapter 1: I Bequeath
This was wonderfully well written. The people came alive and every detail added to the mood you created. The idea that Gil-galad was giving his possessions away because he was weary and, perhaps, saw his death before him was very convincingly rendered. Cirdan too was a unique personality. Just great.