The Struggle Nought Availeth by perelleth

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Aldwen · 18 August 2023 · Chapter 6: The Fidelity Of Stone

Thank you for this beautiful story! You have perfectly captured the sadness and hope of the Second Age. I liked the characters, too, and will definitely read more of what you have written. I love when individual stories of the same author reference each other; this is very much in spirit of Tolkien's own style.

Author's reply

Thanks to you, Aldwen, for taking the time and letting me know. It is always good to know someone is enjoying the same things. I, too, love how wide and deep Tolkien's sandbox is. I've written about the walls of the Grey Havens and the ceremonies for seeing off those departing in different stories along the years, and I only came up with their origins this late. But in trying to be true to Tolkien's world, a fanfic writer also has the joy of consistency. Thanks for your words!

Larner · 9 August 2023 · Chapter 2: Ever the East Wind Swells

Vivid descriptions of both settings and individuals.

Author's reply

Thanks for reading and letting me know!

Larner · 8 August 2023 · Chapter 1: Westward the Land Is Bright

Good to know Gildor sees his duty as providing a rear guard for those remaining in the hither lands.

Author's reply

I am fascinated by Gildor's long story, also he is a good prop that connects elven longevity to the lands of the west. Thanks for letting me know!

Radbooks · 16 July 2023 · Chapter 1: Westward the Land Is Bright

I really enjoyed this first chapter and I'm looking forward to the rest of what you've written. Thanks for sharing!

Author's reply

Hi, Radbooks, thanks for checking in and letting me know that you liked it. I hope you enjoy the rest, too.