Larner · 4 March 2023 · Chapter 0
Your descriptions are exquisite, as always. Ugluk is highly intelligent even for a Uruk-hai warrior. Good to see him using all of his training and advantages. Also like seeing the breadth of their society and the manner in which their hierarchy is arranged. Thanks for this. (By the way, the word for infants turning from mother's milk is "weaned". To wane is to grow smaller. The moon waxes and wanes.)
Author's reply
Oh, thanks! I'll go and correct it ASAP! Sorry for the late answer - for some reason the site no longer sends review alerts to me. It's good to hear from you again. :)