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Conquistadora · 10 October 2022 · Chapter 3

I love your insights into how different Valinor can be. I imagine it must be very disorienting for a hot minute, like but a bit more intense than losing your depth perception with a new pair of glasses. :D

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That’s a great comparison! It seems a very apt description of what newly arrived Elves probably go through… Thx as always for your comments! :-)

Lindelea · 6 October 2022 · Chapter 3

I love how careful and thoughtful his loved ones are being. And I read some of the reviews and review replies and am delighted at the thought of hobbits! (One question: a rented house, not a borrowed one? I guess I am not all that familiar with the Firstborns' economy in the West. I don't know why, but I have trouble envisioning money in that context. But then, I haven't had more than a few glimpses of the West, so I haven't given it much thought, really.)

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Thx so much for reading and for all your comments! I too am looking forward to Hobbits. :-D You know … I hadn’t really thought about it. I guess I just assumed they would need some sort of system to at least move goods and services between people, and I can’t really picture how purely barter-based system would really work there. (The Noldor especially seem to me like the type to develop a monetary system.) Of course, if I remember correctly there are gems just scattered on the beaches, so I don’t think anyone would be without means…. Really interesting question!!

Lindelea · 6 October 2022 · Chapter 2

I forgot to comment on the "Everything seemed more alive" bit. I have tried to express that, too, in my hobbits' dream-encounters with Frodo after he sailed, so I had a shock of recognition when I read that part.

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It’s an interesting challenge, isn’t it, to try to picture and describe how the Undying Lands must be different than Middle-Earth …? :-)

Lindelea · 6 October 2022 · Chapter 2

Such a blend of moods! Love, longing, laughter (“You give the Undying Lands perhaps too much credit, my Lord.”), and more.

Lindelea · 6 October 2022 · Chapter 1

Alas, he sounds so very weary and drained. But his wife is one of the Wise, so I think he is in good hands. Lovely character sketch. Moving reunion.

UTfrog · 28 September 2022 · Chapter 3

So very happy you are continuing this lovely story. Thank you.

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I’m happy you’re enjoying it! Thx so much for your comments!

shirebound · 26 September 2022 · Chapter 3

Celeborn the Wise has distinguished himself in counsel and in blood against far greater foes than most of these will ever see. He need court the favor of none here What a comforting and loving thing to tell him. I'm SO glad you're expanding this story. :)

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Thank you! :-) I’ve often imagined how Celeborn’s arrival would go - I’ve seen various versions, but thought I would try my hand as well. The next chapter should, I hope, be a fun one. :-)

UTfrog · 21 September 2022 · Chapter 2

Absolutely love this! So we’ll done. Thanks

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Thank you! I’m happy you’re enjoying it - thx so much for your comments! :-)

shirebound · 16 September 2022 · Chapter 2

Oops, I meant to say 'experience the hobbits through his POV'. :)

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Hooray for friendly trees indeed! That’s a really fun idea! Hmm … Is there any actual Tolkien lore about how long Frodo may have lived in Valinor, or am I pretty much free to do what I want with that? I will start pondering on how this may happen … ;-) Thx as always for reading! Author Reply: Ah. Found my answer - no specific date. Good. One Hobbit chapter being added. :-)

shirebound · 16 September 2022 · Chapter 2

The tree welcomed him, inviting his touch and offering succor Hooray for friendly trees! I can imagine him planting others, or going far afield to experience how different trees in this new world feel to him and communicate. Legolas would also require this type of comfort. Oooh, might we experience the arrival of the hobbits through his POV? (just hoping....)

Elewen Adaneth · 6 September 2022 · Chapter 1

Gorgeous. I have always wondered what passed when Celeborn and Galadriel reunited in Valinor! I look foreward to hearing more :) I'm always exited when there are any new stories on Celeborn and Galadriel (as a fellow fan-fic writer attempting one myself...) I'm pretty new on stories of arda, though I've been reading here for a while, anyways - It's not about me - thanks for the story!! Elewen Adaneth.

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Thank you! I’m so happy you enjoyed, thx for your comments!

UTfrog · 4 September 2022 · Chapter 1

Wonderful. I hope you will be posting frequently. Thank you for a new story.

Author's reply

I’m happy you enjoyed! This was supposed to be just a two shot, but people seem to like it so I am definitely going to do at least one additional chapter - maybe more, if the inspiration strikes. :-) Thx so much for your comments!

Conquistadora · 4 September 2022 · Chapter 1

Poor Celeborn! He was always such a moody guy. Maybe Valinor can cheer him up. :D

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Ha! Fingers crossed. ;-) Thx so much for your comments, I appreciate them!

Radbooks · 3 September 2022 · Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing.

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I’m so glad! :-) Thx for your comments!

shirebound · 3 September 2022 · Chapter 1

This is wonderful! Dear Celeborn, about whom we know so little but surmise so much. I look forward to future chapters!

Author's reply

Thank you! Celeborn does fascinate me. This will probably be a little two-shot … but if more occurs to me I will write it down. I have always wondered what they all did with themselves, upon reaching Valinor…. Thx so much for your comments!