Do Not Wake Me by Shireling
K'taara · 31 July 2005 · Chapter 0: Do Not Wake Me
Pierce my heart and soul. Lovely, beautiful.My poetry could never compare. Why have you come? My heart, my soul, my dreams, You'll never know, Deep inside my secrets grow, Unless you hold the key to unlock The secrets deep inside of me. To reach my hearts own desire, To find the one that I admire, The feelings inside me do erupt, Why have you come,my heart to corrupt? NO COPYWRITING!!!
Iterildea Turelie Earrinde · 12 November 2004 · Chapter 0: Do Not Wake Me
Very heartwrenching,shows deep feeling.You poured all of your heart and soul into this poem.It seems to me that you wrot what you really feel. KEEP WRITING! I enjoy your writing.you are a natural. I write poetry also.
Author's reply
Thank you for a lovely review. I'm so pleased that this poem touched you. :)
Iorhael · 2 December 2003 · Chapter 0: Do Not Wake Me
I have always admired those who can write poems since I can't! And this one is just so sad. Iorhael
Coriel · 6 October 2003 · Chapter 0: Do Not Wake Me
Of course! *De profundis* is "from the depths"; I was impressed by how so few words could say so very much. And the rest is simply "Lord, grant them eternal rest." :) *Ut pictura poesis* -- Horace (A poem is like a picture.) All the best ~
Coriel · 5 October 2003 · Chapter 0: Do Not Wake Me
Oh, wow. What a powerful litte piece! Truely *de profundis.* I can't find words to do it justice right now; exquisitely sorrowful and yet beautiful at the same time. ((*sniff*)) *Requiem aeternam dona eis, Domine.*
Author's reply
Coriel, Thank you. Poetry is a new area for me and I really appreciate your comments. Helen p.s could you translate the Latin for me!!
TigerLily713 · 24 September 2003 · Chapter 0: Do Not Wake Me
I can almost see his eyes pleading with pain and self-doubt. Well done!
Author's reply
TigerLily Thank you for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it. Helen
Nilmandra · 23 September 2003 · Chapter 0: Do Not Wake Me
I have wondered sometimes if Aragorn and Gandalf saved Frodo for his good, or their own. While I am immensely glad that he sailed west and hope that he found healing there, death might have been greater comfort. You captured his agony well here. Thank you.
Author's reply
Nilmandra Thank you. I had the same thoughts myself. Letting go can be so difficult! Helen
Grand Theft Author Otaku · 23 September 2003 · Chapter 0: Do Not Wake Me
Wow, your a very skilled poet Shireling. Tolkein himself would be proud. I'm going to go and cry now, bye : - )
Author's reply
Thank you Crying is not compulsory but glad to know it touched a chord. Helen