Teitho! by My blue rose
shirebound · 29 April 2019 · Chapter 10: Starry Firmament and Seafoam
"He will bring hope and light to Endor as do the stars," she stated softly, her eyes distant. "On his brow is wisdom, in his hands, healing and in his heat, kindness." It should give these two great comfort, in the challenging years ahead, to know that their first-born has such a destiny... and that both boys will live long and worthwhile lives.
shirebound · 29 April 2019 · Chapter 9: Dawning
the fragile glory of the dawn What a lovely image. This is a wonderful gap filler, very well written.
Larner · 21 July 2016 · Chapter 9: Dawning
Dawn has given her hope. I love how she is willing to sacrifice the sleeves of her chemise for Aragorn's sake, and she imagines that it might upset the Elves should they have to clean the bedding. She is quite innocent in her way. Love the details of her wardrobe, in which extra sleeves and the like are used to make it appear she has more clothing than she actually owns. But we know that Aragorn will know both safety and love here, before he must in the end return to his own people.
Larner · 21 July 2016 · Chapter 8: As I Lay Dying
It was a choice he had to make, I know. And I rejoice that he chose life, and believe that in the end he was also glad, finding that even his most terrible suffering was yet blessed and assisted him to his greater healing in the end.
Larner · 21 July 2016 · Chapter 7: The Circlet
I am glad that Estel was given the chance to appreciate the history of this circlet. And I do hope that Elrond had the chance to return it as he'd planned for so long. To touch such a symbol of history would be quite the honor.
shirebound · 20 July 2016 · Chapter 8: As I Lay Dying
Oh my, what a marvelous image. I wonder if Aragorn sensed any of this?
shirebound · 20 July 2016 · Chapter 7: The Circlet
I enjoyed this conversation very much. How I would love to see that circlet myself!
Lothrandir · 15 July 2016 · Chapter 4: A Study in Opposites
A look into a dwarf's mind, is it? Even though I don't care too much about dwarves in general, this is really good. Yes, this was indeed interesting perspective.
Lothrandir · 15 July 2016 · Chapter 3: In Darkness Bound
And again, your research amazes me, you even remembered that Denethor wore chainmail under his robe. Even his personality and mindset are perfect. Also I love how Gandalf uses Ulmo's words to Turgon to counsel Denethor. You're really starting to show your skills, and I love every moment of reading your stories.
Lothrandir · 15 July 2016 · Chapter 2: Memento Mori
Yes, another chapter! I really enjoyed this one. Your storytelling reminds me of Fiondil, are you sure that you're not him reborn? ^^ I love how you don't present Namo as a villain, he really isn't. He has always struck me as more of a consoler than a judge. I wonder if Tolkien indented that as such, since he portrayed him as grim judge, not afraid of throwing the Noldor out when they rebelled. Anyways, keep up the good work!
Lothrandir · 15 July 2016 · Chapter 1: Gather Ye Rose Buds While Ye May
Like in your previous story, the research is spot on, I absolutely love it! I'm probably going to repeat it in every single story you post. ^^ I really must ask, where do you find your translations, or where did you learn so much about Elvish? Myself being an aspiring fanfiction writer, I'm really interested in learning the languages. Keep up the good work!
Author's reply
Ardalambion is the best site if you want to know more about Tolkien's languages. It also has downloadable dictionaries too.
Larner · 12 July 2016 · Chapter 6: Stubborn as Stone
Alas that Gimli would not marry and carry on the family's lineage. But he has managed to assist in the final victory against Sauron, and he has made a friendship that will surpass almost all within Middle Earth. Love Hlin's ability to appreciate her lack of progress with her son.
Larner · 12 July 2016 · Chapter 5: Cardinal Points
I know that when I was a child I had to overcome my many fears by forcing myself to face them, something I preferred to do alone so as not to embarrass myself in front of my brothers and sister. I feel a kinship with Mistress Estel here!
Author's reply
Thank you!
Larner · 12 July 2016 · Chapter 4: A Study in Opposites
A good first impression here. Love this first look at Legolas through Gimli's eyes.
Author's reply
Thank you!
shirebound · 11 July 2016 · Chapter 5: Cardinal Points
“Your fear does not make you a coward” A most important realization for all of us.
shirebound · 11 July 2016 · Chapter 4: A Study in Opposites
I appreciate viewing familiar scenes through new POVs. This is a nice perception of Gimli's thoughts.
Author's reply
thank you!
Larner · 5 July 2016 · Chapter 3: In Darkness Bound
As if burning that scroll would in turn destroy the truth it contains. Foolish he is indeed! And he does not perceive that he, thinking to preserve the land and not necessarily the individuals within it, is indeed succumbing to foolishness! Prepare for the worst while hoping for the best and working with what actually comes to you is ever the wisest course.
Author's reply
I think you’re right… but I always imagine Denethor as a control freak and not being able to save or protect what he views as his makes him act foolishly… I know too many people like this…
Larner · 5 July 2016 · Chapter 2: Memento Mori
I used to have several different colors of obsidian in my rock collection, but that was many years ago now. I love this look at Namo and his interview with Elrond. Delightful!
Author's reply
I don’t have any rainbow obsidian in my rock collection because it’s kind of expensive and I haven’t been able to justify it… yet!
Larner · 5 July 2016 · Chapter 1: Gather Ye Rose Buds While Ye May
Good advice. As Glorfindel might also have told the youth but had not as yet, those who have not loved have not lived, either, no matter how long it might be they dwell upon the earth. (BTW--whom is used in the objective tense, while who is used when it is the subject of the sentence. With whom will you go to the dance? Who is calling now? Watch out! The latent grammar teacher is getting loose in me!)
Author's reply
Thank you! I actually know how to use ‘who’ and ‘whom’ (pronouns with subjective and objective forms are a leftover from Anglo-Saxon that are slowly fading from common usage and I sometime like to imagine how odd English will sound if it one day losses words like ‘him’ and ‘her’). However, the speech system I use to write with isn’t able to hear the distinction half the time (maybe my California accent throws it off?) or confuses one for the other (it also hilariously misunderstands most Elvish word despite all the times I’ve tried to train it). Unfortunately I tend to miss my grammar mistakes when I self-edit and my beta reader’s (a.k.a. my long-suffering husband) strong suit is math not English… hence all the errors in my stories that drive me crazy.
shirebound · 4 July 2016 · Chapter 2: Memento Mori
Oh my, this is perfectly marvelous. Such a gentle story, with just the right amount of humor. A wonderful tribute to Fiondil, who we all loved so very much.
Author's reply
Thank you! I always enjoyed Fiondil’s take on the Valar and I wrote this not long after he passed.
shirebound · 3 July 2016 · Chapter 1: Gather Ye Rose Buds While Ye May
let us not dwell upon the darkness to come while the days are yet bright Very wise indeed. I enjoyed reading this conversation.
Author's reply
Thank you! No kidding, I struggle with not worrying …
KathyG · 3 July 2016 · Chapter 1: Gather Ye Rose Buds While Ye May
So Estel dyed Glorfindel's hair purple with blackberry juice, did he? I'm surprised Glorfindel didn't get his revenge! =) Seriously, though, Glorfindel is indeed a wise elf. One may avoid pain by refusing to love, but one also misses so much of what makes life worthwhile by doing so. Glorfindel was wise to see that.
Author's reply
Thank you! But…What makes you think Glorfindel didn’t get revenge? *evil grin* I should write about that sometime…
eliza · 3 July 2016 · Chapter 1: Gather Ye Rose Buds While Ye May
Lovely, absolutely lovely. The quote given by Glorifindel fits him perfectly. I enjoyed the small window into Estel's life and how the 'pearls" of wisdom are intertwined with laughter Hope to read more. E
Author's reply
Thank you!