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someone · 2 May 2014 · Chapter 34: The Situation at Edhellond

Finrod is cruel. To tell the young elves to put Monopoly away, without giving them time to check who had won...! And that after playing it for 18 hours! I wouldn't be surprised if the Three Amigos and Nell rebelled one day. It is quite telling that some elves rather sit in trees in the middle of a blizzard than enjoy a warm fire inside Edhellond. It must have been emotionally hard time for everyone. I feel sorry for Ernest, it is hard when something is so very far from what was expected. I was quite surprised to hear that Glorfindel has ruled some mortal realm. How is that possible, everyone must have realized that he is not human in the same way as others? And just what did Celeborn do in Valinor to get that sort of reaction from some elves?

someone · 2 May 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

It seems that nothing can change Glorfindel, not even an experience like that. *grin* That is one stubborn elf, going after the twins the second he is awake... or at least trying to. I really liked Glorfindel's reaction to seeing himself (not handsome and looking like something an orc has dragged in). I'm curious about the "Being of Light". Olórin or someone else? I also think that this may be the first time Glorfindel has been bested by a five feet tall woman.

Ninquetari · 1 May 2014 · Chapter 34: The Situation at Edhellond

It's highly interesting to read how you solve out the webs you've put them all into. Do you plan it all beforehand, and know how it'll end? On a side note, the reactions of the Valinorean elves to Celeborn's name hint there's a story behind it... Would you ever write it? Thank you for writing and sharing. Ninquetari

Monalex · 30 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Hello Fiondil! So dear Glorfindel is finally awake!! I'm so happy for him!! Though I know the recovery will be long and a little painful, more so if he is overdoing it. But ohh well, was kind of expecting him to act like that... I would have been deatly worried if he acted complacent. Though I hope Finrod can divise some games or entertainments to keep Glorfindel content and resting in a bed. I lked that neither the Valar or the Maiar were willing to take any chances on his recovery, deciding to better be there all the time. Also I'm wondering how does Namo feel to have people praying to him hoping to avoid death? Glorfindel is right in that the twins will listen only to him and no one else, he must be the one to go pick them up!! I wouldn't like being the twins when he does catch up to them, beacuse they will not only have to deal with an angry and dissapointed Glorfindel, but also with an angry Ron for taking his daughter, an angry Finrod for leaving and therefore having his brother go pick them up even though he's quite hurt and an angry Kyle for disobeying his orders. Although if and when they return, will they take up residence again in Edehellond or will they now move to an apartment or hotel for the moment? To have some distance from the Valinorean Elves I mean... From the last chapter, it felt somehow forced and as an order to have Helena apologize to Glorfindel, I just don't feel she is sorry of what she said... I'm quite disapointed by Finrod's reaction to Helena's comment, I was expecting him to be furious and while you do mention that he was, he kind of lost that anger when he heard what she said, that Glorfindel was just a Lord of a House that no longer exists. In essence he did nothing, just reminded her that Glorfi is his brother and as far as he is concerned that is the highest tittle. So any claim to authority Glorfindel may have comes from that title? I hope you have Glorfi being horribly dissapointed in that horrible elleth and having him look into other fish in the sea or at the very least have him reafirm his bachelorhood. Great chapter as always! Monalex

Kevana · 30 April 2014 · Chapter 33: A Quiet Evening

Fiondil, something randomly popped into my head - is Amroth a fan of the name Alexander because he'd like to name one of the kids after Alex? (Though that was originally just a code name, now it seems like it's going to be his official chosen name anyway.) Maybe no connection but had to ask! Thanks! -Kevana

obsidianj · 29 April 2014 · Chapter 34: The Situation at Edhellond

At least Earnur seems sincere in accepting Vorondur's apology. I'm not so sure about Vardamir. His apology seems not in the right frame of mind. It sounds as if he is just going through the motions without meaning it. Hopefully, he will come to his senses. Loved the Monopoly marathon. It evokes fond memories of games that went on for days. Finrod is in a dangerous mood. He needs some way to let off steam. This run sounds like a good idea. The youngster are caught in the middle. No wonder they try to hide, they don't want to take sides and don't know what to do. I could rattle Helyanwe. I think she still has no idea, what was so offensive about her words. She sees the results and realizes that Finrod is angry, but the reason is out of her experience. She has a lot to learn.

SashaHoneypalm · 29 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

So who's the being of light? Glorfindel's met, over the course of "Elf Interrupted", all the Valar, Eru, and the Flame Imperishable, but he doesn't seem to recognize his visitor. Then again, he had trouble recognizing himself, too; I suppose he's not at the top of his mental game at the moment.

Laer · 29 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

So glad Glorfindel is up and moving around. Good sign that he is wanting real food to eat. :) I do not envy the twins once he gets a hold of them tho. I have a feeling it will not be fun for either of them. (Yikes!) Nurse Callahan...he is lucky it wasn't Nurse Ratchet (One flew over the cuckoos nest)She seems pretty nice and mellow :)

FV_Whisper · 29 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Fiondil, I don't think people are really expecting you to write about everything we want to hear. That would take ages and I'm already surprised how much stories you produce. I think you've written more then Tolkien himself has ever published! Hey, and what's wrong with some imagination? I can really see a Fiondilverse getting started *snorts* Too bad I'm like the worlds slowest writer :P

Tari · 29 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Glorfindel is finally awake. What a scary situation he's coming out of. I'm glad he opted for life. Mischievous twins watching mischievous twins sounds like a lot of fun to me.

Lyana · 29 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Oh Glorfindel - *again* with that must-help-Turgon's-descendents thing! At least he wasn't battering at the door in Mandos again (thanks to Olorin's pursuasive efforts). Yeah, I think we might have to start a Nurse Callahan Fan Club too... Can't wait to see what's up with Sarah and the twins (and the Maia twins?? oh dear...). We really, truly do understand that you can't spend the rest of the ages of Arda detailing every little thing in this world you've imagined; it's a testimony to the depth you've given your characters that we've become so emotionally invested in them. But don't be too surprised if you inspire Fiondilverse fan fiction! :-) *Tea for me, thanks. Anyone care for clotted cream, lemon curd or raspberry jam with the scones?*

Larner · 29 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

I'm just glad that it's Olorin watching over him at the moment. I'd think that he'd feel the connection pretty well at this point. I agree--a stubborn cuss he is!

Kaylee Arafinwiel · 29 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Atto :) *joins others up on top of cliff, having lagged behind due to walking issues and RL stress* *nevertheless, is carrying basket of chocolate, some angel food cake and 2-liter of cherry Pepsi, with the friendly neighborhood elfling to help* *collapses somewhere near Atto* Here I am! finally! and I hope you had a wonderful Holy Week and blessed Easter - I hope your RL is treating you better than mine is treating me, and I *really* hope you're doing better than Glorfi! My goodness, what a pickle... And just *what* are the Maia Twins doing in Fairbanks, not to mention the Els and Sarah...I hope they're all right! Ron scared the ever-living daylights out of me back there, glad to see he's back to normal. (Another Ron *cough*Ada*cough* has been causing the primary RL issues that kept me at the bottom of the cliff - sorry :( ) I hope Farrell et al aren't behind this but I keep worrying that they are...and what are the Three Amigos, Nell, and the other ellith up to? Especially Helena, isn't it? I do hope she apologizes! Good grief... *passes out chocolate truffles and Cadbury Flake to everyone* *takes very last stick of Cadbury Flake for self and bites off the end of it* Pass the popcorn, whoever's got it...it's going to be a loooooooong week, I can tell already! *also tosses a truffle in Dr. Stoner's direction, and his nurse's too* Hooray for common sense prevailing! (Now, if only that common sense transferred to my Adar and Naneth...what I wouldn't give sometimes to be in Glorfi's place and blissfully unaware of the world. At least if I was out for the count I wouldn't be worrying about how much I hurt them or make them think I'm useless...*fervently* thank Eru you never think that way about me, I'm glad I have adopted family I can count on.) Tye-melin, Kaylee

Diana · 28 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Yea!! My hero's back!!!!!....and there he goes. So I guess Glorfindel is going to see the hospital in Fairbanks now. He is putting himself in danger medically and I don't think even an Elf can recover *that* quickly from what he's been through. So people who've had NDAs often don't recognize themselves. Interesting!!! I always love Namo. The only other Death that seems as Good in popular modern books (and yeah, I think of this as a book) is Terry Pratchett's, though *very* different personality. Looking forward to Fairbanks on Friday. It looks like the cliff party's heading towards alcohol so I guess I better leave. Being allergic to alcohol I tend to break out (you know, teeth, windows, TV sets, rehab, jail...well just once) Again thanks for the great read! I'm so glad Glorfidel's back. The Dude abides!

Ellie · 28 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

That was not unsettling at all for Glorfindel to wake up and cite an out of body experience as reasoning for needing to go to Fairbanks. LOL It is amusing watching folks reason with him almost like bribing a two year old. "I am not tired!" Followed by the stomping of a foot and an immediate loss of consciousness. I hope the medical personnel can hold onto him beyond noon of the next day. He is far weaker than he realizes...

FV_Whisper · 28 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Kevana, you're totally right how this is another perfect example how the story sometimes shows we're really dealing with Elves here, seeing how a Mortal having similar injuries would not be out of the woods, so to speak of for a longer time. Still, having Finrod in mind who's been suffering from the after effects from getting shot for a very long time, I think Glorfindel might not have recovered enough yet for a nice little trip to Fairbanks, especially since that nice little trip is bound to turn into something more. Now, I know it has been said before Finrod has been recovering slowly because his body has not experience any major injuries so far, while I think this has been quite te opposite for Glofindel through the ages. Ellon can't stay long enough out of trouble not to get more or less badly hurt once in a while. But still, I think Glorfindel is wanting to do things more than a little too fast here, no matter what his condition is.

6336 · 28 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Have the Twins(Perhdhel) met the Twins(Maia) at all? Another one for the Bunny Hutch for which I will provide plenty of juicy carrots and banana chips, I knew a bunny who liked them once To UTFrog, tea is acceptable, no coffee unless it's de-caf, my preferred beverage is Caffeine Free Pepsi with a good slug of bourbon in it!(Hides the taste of the Pepsi!) This is turning into something of a wild party, well at least the ride is wild! Huggs, Lynda

FV_Whisper · 28 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Last few chapters, we had a lot of Glorfindel without him being present, now we have a lot of Glorfindel with him actually being present. And how! When reading Kyle had banned all the elves, I actually felt worried about that, so it's good to see "Nate" and Olórin aren't taking any chances with him. - “I get it all the time, people praying when they feel Death is near, hoping to avoid it for themselves or others or, in rare cases, welcoming it. Sometimes I even listen.” - Wow, Námo is really being Námo here, now isn't he? (I was looking for a word to describe him, then found out Námo was actually the one applying best to it lol) - “At the moment, they are where they need to be,” Námo replied. “Manveru and Erunáro are keeping an eye on them.” “So Fionwë told me,” Olórin said with a nod. “Twin troublemakers to look after twin troublemakers. Now there’s a recipe for mayhem if there ever was one.” - Well, it's good to know at least some Maier are there to look after the twins, even though Olórin's descriptions sounds like a recipe for mayhem to me too. I really hope you're not planning on putting them through too much *snorts* - “I’m not very handsome, am I? I thought I was more handsome than that.” - *snorts* This isn't really the right moment for Glorfindel for being all too vain. And then Glorfindel is awake, and o my! Nurse Callahan sure knows how to handle a situation. Why does Wiseman get all this over-competent medical staff? Must have something to do with the Valar luring them there. Harris's knowledge of Sindarin is too funny. Too bad Glorfindel wasn't able to tell more about the attack. Finrod seemed to know there was a chance Glorfindel might wake up out of healing sleep early? (those pesky Reborns all the time!) Why didn't he inform the other healers about that, or at least discus the option with him? Seriously, whether he thinks the Twins need him or not, wether the Twins really need him or not, I really don't think it's a good idea for Glorfindel to go off to Fairbanks now in a rush. This is almost bound to go wrong.. 6336, a wild ride ahead, I can see that too. UTfrog, I'll drink most things as long as it's no alcohol and no coffee: sodas, fruit juice, water, flavored or not. So have a go at it.

Legolin · 28 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Glorfindel is finally awake!! *happy dance* I love that he is being his stubborn self and causing problems from the git-go. Loved the below scenes as well! They made me laugh. “At the moment, they are where they need to be,” Námo replied. “Manveru and Erunáro are keeping an eye on them.” “So Fionwë told me,” Olórin said with a nod. “Twin troublemakers to look after twin troublemakers. Now there’s a recipe for mayhem if there ever was one.” I can't help but hope that the twins will all meet face to face haha. Their shenanigans would be hilarious! “But I don’t look like that… do I?” The Being chuckled. “Yes, I’m afraid you do.” “I’m not very handsome, am I? I thought I was more handsome than that.” Poor Glorfindel. Seeing ones self in disarray would be so disheartening. But his reaction made me chuckle. Can't wait for Friday's episode. ~Lin

Kevana · 28 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

That Glorfindel's able to sit up just a few days after nearly being killed/enduring major surgery is another of those "wait a minute" moments that you throw in your stories that helps bring home how tough the Elves are. Imagine recovering that quickly from something that awful! And now he wants to go dashing off after the Twins and Sarah, well, as bad an idea as that might sound, he's usually been right about it before in your other stories. Stubborn is for sticky door hinges, Glorfindel is in a class of his own, LOL! So nice to see Dr. Harris again, I really like him for all that he's a minor character. And that nurse is a trip. Two quotes that stood out in particular: "Of course, they also couldn’t see me, but that’s a minor point.” *undignified snort* And: "not caring if I lived or died" Oh honey, that bad? Was that really all about what Helena said to him or were there other things going into play with it? :( I hope maybe we get to hear more about what was going through his head that night. I know they've got to be giving a giant sigh of relief that he's out of immediate danger. Whether he's about to go right back into it again in Fairbanks..? Can't wait to find out. Thanks for the wonderful update! This string of calmer chapters has been a very nice restful part in the story pacing. You have a spectacular week and take care, and feel better from that pesky hanging-on cold! -Kevana

Lindelea · 28 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Aha. Story is beginning to move forward again. It's been in something of a holding pattern for the last few chapters -- not stagnant, that's not what I mean, for a great deal of importance happened while Glorfindel was sleeping (and now I want to haul out "While You Were Sleeping" and watch it again... silly random me). But the momentum is beginning to build. UTF -- I'll be happy to bring good strong coffee (NorthWest style, only tastier than Starbucks) and perfectly brewed British-style tea (part of the secret there is to warm the pot before brewing)... One of the other readers I happen to know is partial to Mike's Hard Cranberry Lemonade, so do add a little of that to your stock, if you please. As for me, I'm very happy with Pina Coladas made with fresh pineapple and fresh coconut milk -- none of this canned or concentrated stuff. But then, when you're reading good writing, it's always good to have the best of the best to go along with it.

6336 · 28 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

O.K. seat belt is buckled and we are taxiing to the runway, preparing for take off. I see a wild ride ahead. Glorfi is one stubborn little sun of a gun isn't he, never did like to be laid up or listen to his healers. Just why does he need to get to Fairbanks? (I know, I know wait until Friday!) I wonder if Namo ever answers any of the prayers he listens to. Nurse Callahans technique is almost as good as Kyle's when it comes to unruly patients. Wonder if they teach it in Med School, How to Control Unruly Patients 101. Having a Healer with him at all times is a good idea, some times Glorfi is an accident waiting to happen! Have a good week, Huggs, Lynda

Dreamflower · 28 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Aha! So THAT'S the reason for Glorfindel's earlier "walkabout"! He knows where the twins and Serinde are, and will be able to find them! And my ominous feelings regarding Fairbanks are only getting stronger...

UTfrog · 28 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

Great chapter to start off the week. Loved Lord Namo's comment on prayers. Also loved the twin troublemakers idea. You must have something awful about to happen to Dan/Ron/Serende if Glorfindel is that upset. Your descriptions of his being wrapped in light are lovely. Thank you to several reviewers who offered to help me carry our beverages up the cliff. We will need them soon it appears. FV_Whisper, 6336, and Kevanna (?), please name your beverage so I can be certain to bring plenty.

Sunny · 28 April 2014 · Chapter 35: An Interlude with Glorfindel

When Glorfindel ended up in the hospital, I thought to myself that he was going to be an absolute joy when he woke up again, NOT!!! And I was right, wasn't I? I rather liked Nurse Callahan - she doesn't mess around, and that is certainly necessary with this particular patient!