Reviews (21)

Linda Hoyland · 9 June 2013 · Chapter 3: The Way Out

I'm sorry to see this series come to an end as I've enjoyed it very much and would love more tales of Harad from you. I especially enjoyed the irony about Thorongil before they knew who Aragorn was. I love your stories and hope there will soon be more.You are a very talented writer. As you asked for concrit "and by luck alone I stumbled upon a certain First Age bauble tucked away on a run-down ranch and so picked up your trail.” I heard the pop of a cork. “Have some wine, Gandalf,” Dakheel said, “It seems you could use it.” "Ranch" and use it" sound very American rather than M-e to this British reader, "Farm" and "need it, or could do with it" would sound more M-e. The rest of the story feels like a lost chapter from Tolkien.

rs · 8 June 2013 · Chapter 3: The Way Out

You never cease to amaze me. As usual, the reader ends up wanting more at the end of the story. The conclusion was just heartwrenching *sob*. Your Aragorn is so the Aragorn that I imagine he would be. The images you conjure up (it's not hard for a scene to develop in my mind with your wonderful descriptions), the emotions, the anticipation...everything! I'm still dying to know who the "master of the house" is. For the life of me, I can't figure it out, it seems that it might be someone I should know? Or I could be totally wrong and he/she is a totally new character not yet introduced to your stories and you're just doing this to drive me crazy? I hope I see more of your writings!

Larner · 3 June 2013 · Chapter 3: The Way Out

How difficult to have to face such suspicion, and from one thought of as a friend. It must have been difficult to kill Tariq, but to turn against Aragorn simply because he was identified as Thorongil was not a good turn of affairs. But why did the former boy thief want to tell the whole story now? I find myself wondering as to what in this new comer brought out such frankness.

Phyloxena · 3 June 2013 · Chapter 3: The Way Out

A great twist. Please, more!

Elentarri · 2 June 2013 · Chapter 3: The Way Out

"an invasion from the Last Alliance of Concerned Relatives.” " = Priceless :D Can't wait for your next story.

Agape4Gondor · 1 June 2013 · Chapter 3: The Way Out

Wow! What a great way to end this. My mouth was open the entire time. You are such an awesome storyteller. Bravo! Can't wait for more tales.

shirebound · 1 June 2013 · Chapter 3: The Way Out

A masterful tale, beautifully crafted. It's as if you've uncovered previously-unknown, hidden manuscripts from days that have slipped into legend.

Linda Hoyland · 30 May 2013 · Chapter 2: The Traitor's Rewards

Hooray for Aragorn! This story left me wanting to cheer.I think we both see Aragorn in a similiar light,so I love reading your stories about him. You are inspiring me to write more about this culture!

Lyana · 29 May 2013 · Chapter 2: The Traitor's Rewards

Love, love, LOVE your characterizations! I will be very sorry indeed to see these tales of Harad come to an end. You've developed a side of Aragorn that I don't think I've seen in fan fic before (but must have existed for him to have survived the way he did!). And I will now, forever, have "Dakheel" ingrained in my mind as one of his many names.

Larner · 29 May 2013 · Chapter 2: The Traitor's Rewards

Aha! Oh, but Aragorn has given this man a good deal of well-deserved grief! And I suspect that nomadic tribe indeed was strengthened by Aragorn's men. And it's likely that this group of "traders" includes some of the missing villagers. Trust the Eye's people to resort to violence as "discipline" and overkill as retribution.

Elentarri · 29 May 2013 · Chapter 2: The Traitor's Rewards

Delightful chapter. I'm so happy you posted something - I was having withdrawal symptoms. ;)

Agape4Gondor · 29 May 2013 · Chapter 2: The Traitor's Rewards

I love these stories. ,

UTfrog · 29 May 2013 · Chapter 2: The Traitor's Rewards

"All the honor He deserves" is a great line! So very truthful and so very deceiving. I love your Aragorn. He remains quite honorable, but is a very sneaky devil. This trilogy gets better and better. Thank you for some great reading. You write excellent dialogue. Your characters come alive through their speech patterns. Hope your exams went well.

Phyloxena · 29 May 2013 · Chapter 2: The Traitor's Rewards

This is great. I love your stories. You managed to write Aragorn through unsympathetic, hostile perception and to give him all the credit he deserves. He is a great captain and military leader, and these traits are hard to portray through friendly eyes :). Waiting for the next chapter.

bookworm · 21 May 2013 · Chapter 1: The Tall Tark

Oh, but that was brilliant, I loved the innkeepers voice! And I was sniggering by about half-way through the story. More? =D

Larner · 18 May 2013 · Chapter 1: The Tall Tark

And just why do I suspect that those passing through this inn managed to come from Imran's train of slaves? Heh! Excellently done! Good for the pale faced Tark!

UTfrog · 18 May 2013 · Chapter 1: The Tall Tark

After I read this last night, I wrote a long (for me) review and tried to post. The server connection timed out before the review was sent. I am going to try to recreate what I wrote this morning. First, much as we all want to keep reading, your exams are far more important. Take good care of yourself in this stressful time and best wishes in the exams. The story is excellent! Painful to read, but quite exciting as the mysterious disappearances of the slaves keep happening. Your use of the innkeeper as narrator was also a great frame. Aragorn was incredibly brave (or stupid) to turn himself back in to be sold as a galley slave. Thanks for telling us that we may not hear that story. I cannot help but think (hope) that some of the freed Gondorian fighters eventually made their way back to Minas Tirith and added to the mystery of Thorongil. The power of your work continues to grow. Thank you so much.

Linda Hoyland · 18 May 2013 · Chapter 1: The Tall Tark

Love your innkeeper, he reminds me of Butterbur.I loved the way Aragorn outwitted the slave trader, but wished he hadn't had to suffer so much.He is so brave and noble. Would love to hear events from his POV if you feel inspired. Good luck with your finals and thank you for these great stories.

Agape4Gondor · 18 May 2013 · Chapter 1: The Tall Tark

This was absolutely excellent. I can't wait to see the next two chapters. Wow - a great 'ghost' story and more. I loved every moment of it.

Matt · 18 May 2013 · Chapter 1: The Tall Tark

I just caught up "Ransom" and then read this follow-on. Very interesting and well done. I like your characterizations and your plot is stable with solid and consistent development. Character motivations shift in predictable and reasonable ways which is a nice thing to see in fanfic..... I'm interested to see how you do the other chapters in this shorter fic and thank you for your hard work on it and its predecessor.

Nala · 17 May 2013 · Chapter 1: The Tall Tark

What a wonderful thing to find on a Friday afternoon! This day is now perfect. I don't think I've ever read a story written quite that way, but it's certainly a style I can get behind. The storyteller's constantly inserting his bits and bobs of commentary made it very easy to feel drawn into the story, rather than just reading a description of it. Thank you for continuing to write wonderful things, and good luck with those finals!