Sentiment's Turn by Mysterious Jedi
Anni · 28 December 2004 · Chapter 9: Race Resolved
Ooops, sorry, I left a review before, didn't realize that the story was over. That's too bad that it is, but it was great, once again! =)
Author's reply
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Maybe I'll write an epilogue of some sort someday, if inspiration strikes, but I really don't know. :)
Anni · 28 December 2004 · Chapter 9: Race Resolved
Very good! You really are very good at writing! This story is fun to read, and I hope you continue more soon!
DAYNA · 28 December 2004 · Chapter 9: Race Resolved
Wonderful story, Jedi! I really enjoyed it! I would like to see it 'fleshed out' a bit more. You have the basis for some very in-depth characters. You can give them more of a history, give us more insight into their thoughts/feelings and the like. Build on this. You're a great writer! :)
Author's reply
Thanks! I think I'll be working more on one-shots for a while, much less pressure, but I may edit this someday and perhaps write some fillers or an epilogue of some sort. You never can tell :)
DAYNA · 28 December 2004 · Chapter 3: Violet's Secret
wonderful, jedi! this is very interesting so far! I do have a helpful hint, however: King Elessar merely smiled at her astonishment. "It is said that Orcs are the descendants of elves ruined by evil. If darkness can make an orc an elf, I see no reason that light cannot turn one back again." I think you meant to say "darkness can make an ELF an ORC..." you put it the other way around. Or did I misread it. I am notorious for that, you know. keep up the good work! I like this story!
Author's reply
Hmm... I guess I thought I had replied to this months ago, sorry. Anyways, thanks for commenting and pointing out my mistake.
mirax · 17 October 2004 · Chapter 8: Family and Such
hey, this is an interesting story, i would like to read more of it. Anyway i would like to know arwen reaction, you haven't spoken about her and i don't think she will be more receptive than her brothers, after all her mother was attacked by orcs and had to left middle-earth, she never get the chance to said her goodbye 'cause she stayed and married to aragorn, no i don't think she will like this :-).
Author's reply
Thank you for your comments, I'll see if I can write Arwen in somehow.
MysteriousWays · 13 April 2004 · Chapter 4: Love for Beauty
I am really enjoying this story. I think I will have to pass it onto my sister since if goes along with an idea she had for a fan fiction. You have captured perfectly Sam's way of speaking which is in my view not easy. For that matter eachof your characters have their own clearly distinct voice. I am looking forward to reading your next post. Mys- Once in a while I get time to read.
Author's reply
What's your sister's penname?
hobbit_lass · 12 February 2004 · Chapter 3: Violet's Secret
Very Interesting! Cant wait to see what comes next-
Author's reply
Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
MysteriousWays · 10 October 2003 · Chapter 2: Hidden Heritage
Most tantalizing, I am really looking forward to the next post. MysteriousWays
Author's reply
Reviewed twice, impressive. Thank you.
MysteriousWays · 13 September 2003 · Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I am hooked!!! :) MysteriousWays