The Omen by Linda Hoyland

Reviews (2)

Raksha The Demon · 30 October 2011 · Chapter 1: The Omen

The guys never seem to catch a break when they go out for a nice ride in the country, do they?! Nice, atmospheric tale for this time of year. I once had very good luck a day after encountering a black cat; so I consider them to be lucky, or at least not unlucky.

Author's reply

Many thanks for your much appreciated review. Maybe one day I'll write a story where they simply have a nice day out! I once took an exam and a black cat wandered into the room and past my desk so I could stroke it. I got an A!

Estelcontar · 30 October 2011 · Chapter 1: The Omen

As I told you already, I liked this story when I first read it, but it reads much better now and I like it even more. I really enjoyed your forthright Ioreth. It's a wonderful Halloween tale of the kind I like most because I can read it. I don't read real scary stories, you see.

Author's reply

Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you enjoyed this revised version. I had to flesh it out and develop the story better. I'm pleased this was a Halloween story you could enjoy.